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So Soft and pristine, she lays asleep, properly endearing.
Infantile gentle breath has no knowledge of a world worth fearing.
The perfect roundness of her face is disturbed by just a dimple.
So like the one on my own chin loving her is even more the simple.
Breathing shallow baby breaths her little belly rising
I stare at such a perfect form with rapt absorption, memorizing
every inch so when she grows I can reminisce and say to all
(with my hand held two feet high) I remember when she was this tall.
I await those days, await first words and when you find your feet.
For now I savor utter you and breath in your heart\'s beat.
You do your part calmly laying on your back, arms spread wide
And allow yourself to fill my sight and stiffen my heart with pride
soundly sleeping you no naught of my paternal silent watch
and I so fear to break the spell I dare not even hotch
I fall asleep leaning there and gazing down at you
So I can be there when you wake to find the day is new.
©2003-2009 ~voixdelaraison
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Author's Comments

This is for a contest in the ~verses-versus club. It's extremely close to me.

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:iconjourney:
how precious, very nice
:iconsjt81:
Wow, wonderful work. I like it a lot. Really s hows the innocence of the childern of our world. Excellent job.

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You smell.
:icondaymare01:
This was beautiful.
:iconeskie:
Sniff Sniff Sniff

Crying Crying Crying

im telling you twinie...i hope you're in her life from now till forever. oh god she's so cute and yeah lol

The perfect roundness of her face is disturbed by just a dimple.
So like the one on my own chin loving her is even more the simple.


That makes her your daughter darling :) (Smile)

Hug

i want my own baby too *sigh* :( (Sad)

+fav
:icongalaxie:
This is really lovely. You are expressing such beautiful thoughts here, it can't help but make one smile. :D (Big Grin)

Rose

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* reality is the pawn of ideas *
:iconvoixdelaraison:
Crap, I just realized in line 13 no should be know. I shoulda caught that earlier. :frown:

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"Oh well, in hell we like it well, we think it's fine we think it's swell" - Choking Victim
"Ok, today was a good day, I didn't even have to use my AK, at least I didn't get my heart broken anyway. Wasting time in west New Jersey" - Ataris
:iconottoman42:
Hey Mike this stuff if great. as much shit as we give you. You'll make a good Dad. And wirte some real cool poetry.

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:horns: HaVe FuN :horns:
=Otto(man)

Proud member of ~critiqueme
:iconeskie:
sigh yeah you'll make a good dad
OF COURSE YOU'lL MAKE A GOOD DAD! you're mah twin! lol
if u're a bad daddy then i'll be a bad mummy so thats not going to happen hwahahaha
u better be a good daddy

and yeah line 13 *shrugs*

Shh
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I like it, it's sweet. The format makes my ribs hurt though.

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